Amid hopes and cares, amid fears and passions, believe that every day that has dawned is your last. Gratefully will arrive to you another hour unhoped for. As for me, when you want a laugh, you will see me in fine state, fat and flourishing, a hog from Epicurus's herd.
- Quintus Horatius Flaccus - Letter to Tibullus
jnamiotka - I know this is not Lucretius, but if you are up for it, I would be appreciative of your commentary on the passage from Horace which I see frequently quoted, but which I have always wondered as to the most literal way to translate. The above version is the one I have featured on the sidebar of this forum, but if it can be improved in accuracy it would be good to do that.
From wikipedia: https://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Horace
For example the "true" in "true hog" probably does not appear in the Latin.
The version at Epicurus.net is http://www.epicurus.net/en/tibullus.html -
Amid hopes and cares, amid fears and passions, believe that every day that has dawned is your last. Gratefully will arrive to you another hour unhoped for. As for me, when you want a laugh, you will see me in fine state, fat and flourishing, a hog from Epicurus's herd.
Another version (unclear as to name of translator): http://www.authorama.com/works-of-horace-8.html --
When you have a mind to laugh, you shall see me fat and sleek with good keeping, a hog of Epicurus’ herd.
Another version ("Letters of Horace Presented to Modern Readers")